User blog comment:Beast of burden/BioShock: Origins idea/@comment-1500935-20131206072246

Déjà vu, and I'm tired of the save-your-daughter kind of story. Americans overuse it in their movies and video games so I'm not particulary looking for that in fan fictions. Why wouldn't the guy just start looking for a way out of a decaying utopia without any burden? Also you should read yourself a bit more before posting, you made spelling errors on several names and you forgot capital letters at the start of all your phrases.