User blog comment:Beast of burden/BioShock: Origins idea/@comment-1500935-20131206072246/@comment-1500935-20131206182914

The part with Sullivan convincing you of her death is a too much similar to Booker and Sally in Burial at Sea. It would be better to have her kidnapped during the civil war, then maybe have the protagonist make his way to Point Prometheus to find her, using the confusion of Atlas' attacks to go through. However, there's still a problem: even if he finds his daughter turned into a Little Sister, he won't be able to save her unless he has a way to Tenenbaum, and that she successfully made the Plasmid to harmlessly remove the slug from the girl. Still having Tenenbaum using her to test said Plasmid, and succeeding for the first time would be interesting too, as well as showing how she was first able to save "her little ones".