User blog comment:Beast of burden/BioShock: Origins idea/@comment-1500935-20131206072246/@comment-16410636-20131206091940

1) the reason i used the daughter is because i wanted to give it more purpose then just HAY lets get out the city. 2) im disleksik and i was writeing this a 1 in the morning so i didnt realy care about the capitals or mistakes if u can read it then whats the problem. 3) if you can give me a better plot line then escape the city (seeing as this goes from the day Fontaine is killed to the Kashmire bombings/start of civil war) then be my geust post it up mate.